Narrative Writing

Once upon a time in a deep peaceful forest,there was Two little
siblings named were Santana and Laura, they had no parents or
family members but at least they still had each other.They still had a
happy life,they never left each other or argued until a hideous old
woman came along and knocked on there wooden door ‘’little girls
little girls let me in I have a surprise for you please let me come in
’’ said the hideous old woman The girls both looked at each other
they were frightened ‘’Why would a stranger knock  on our door’’
whispered Santana with a frightened voice,Laura’s eye grow wide
like it was the end of the world they didn’t want to look out the
window they were to afraid ‘’What should we do’’said Laura
sounding like she was going to cry, ‘’I don’t know’’ said Santana,
they opened the door with fear in their eyes,they looked at the old
hideous women,she pulled out a knife out of her black coat full of
feathers AND

                ‘’I WOKE UP’’

It was just a nightmare I thought I was going to die until I saw a one
young girl and one old ugly one they were both on the ground. I was
in a strange place and there were blood coming out of their heads,
there was one that had a black coat full of feathers and a girl with
short black hair ,she looked very familiar WAIT! Who Am I?